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In Perfect Harmony
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In Perfect Harmony |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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In Perfect Harmony your fingers strum across my back tweaking sinew and flesh like strings on a violin they practice their fingering (practice makes perfect) bridging waist to flit effortlessly upon navel before striking lower chords I am your instrument a concerto for your ears only I am reed and wind and string toneless save for in your hands where strummed by fingers - given breath I’m treble and base scaled then paused - a symphony awaiting your encore [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (01-20-2008 11:05 PM).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh my ... that's beautiful Ruth.  It's lovely to read you! This poem is like music to my eyes and mind ... wonderful and flowing.  Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
beautiful poem as always beautiful poem. very elegant! enjoyed Tom |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Hoot_owl_rn, It's great to see your work here again. This is very good. I now post all my stuff at "Insights". They keep deleating my posts here. Bobby |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...and may the music forever play on! Brava! A concerto written "In Perfect Harmony".  Beautifully scored! Smiling here.  Linda |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Play on...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am reed and wind and string toneless save for in your hands Wow.... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Dear friends thank you all so much for these comments Ruth I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Ruth... you are simply devine! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Hootie - this one is a Hottie! Whew!!! You always could light the fire on the page, girl. This is just beautiful, love the imagery and the flow of it. So good to read you again, too! ~Caroline~ |
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