Open Poetry #41 |
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Silk Burns |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
Silk burns the skin of yearning lips, swirling, tempting the eyes of a blind bearer....the smell of temptation wandering over the face, teasing one to find but a moment to delve unselfishly into the waters of swirling breaths where beauty lies dormant amongst the reeds. Where shadows lure a damp fog into the whispering ebb of brine. Where life effortlessly finds a release of that which time holds against the bosom of wantonness as wishful souls pray for that which binds them to allow freedom’s reign to break the riderless horse as passion walks the dunes of naked wisdom into the cool of a fading night. We’ll see if this makes any sense.... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Magnus- you always have a great way with words! ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes you do, and I for one, have missed them. good to read you again~ My spirit will rise |
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tonyV Junior Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 36 |
As the above said, you really have a way with words. Bravo. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh yes, it made perfect sense to me Barry - very much enjoyed... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the imagery is wonderful...you have a way of creating a picture in the reader's mind |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great visual picture Magnus, enjoyed Lindsay |
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