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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Action...scene one If someone were to tell you that you looked hot would you accept their praises or not? And would you enter into a relationship with them not knowing if it would work out as planned. And what would become of choices such as that based only upon vision and statements of fact. Perhaps the chances of success would get better when based upon whether they find your personality, and the goals you're pursuing equally alluring. JamesLee 20January 2008 |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ok, well at my age, if someone says I look hot then I'm gonna take that and run with it!!  but you're right my sweet James, relationships are built on far greater things than looking hot nicely done.. love RDB any sign of your honey yet?? Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
When the first words from a man are "you are hot" then he doesn't have very significant "plans" ... he just wants to find out if he is right!  If the remark is made in the context of other evaluations/considerations it can be tolerated maybe, but not on its own. It's downright blunt.You are a gentleman and you know that. love Margherita |
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Clang Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222 |
"If someone were to tell you that you looked hot..." If someone ever said that to me I would head straight to my shrink and tell him my invisible pills wore off! Great write...and very true. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I agree with the two responses above that being "hot" is just a come-on and the conversations that follow are more important. But I would accept the praise graciously M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Roniece, Margherita, Clang and Nakdthoughts for the wonderful responses... In some lunchtime conversations with some of my friends we discussed this very subject...I posed the question "What if you were attracted to a woman thinking she was hot, and you dated her but found out that it was only a sexual or physical attraction, and in matters of intellect, goals and personality it was a terrible choice."... In most cases they said it would be a quick fling if looks and personality didn't match... Roniece if my honeys flight doesn't get delayed in Chicago she will be here in less than seven hours...I'll be waiting for my honey...James |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
James that seven hours are up by now so I sincerely hope that your honey has turned up and every thing turns out just as you have planned. good luck my friend. Lindsay |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah Lindsay... you are so nice... I'm sure James and his honey are just fine... wouldn't you love to be a fly on the wall though! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
If a stranger were to come up to me and say that I was "hot", I would not be flattered. That is rather crass and is not a way to treat a lady ~ which I am.  lolHowever, if I was to be told that by a man who knows the real me, I would be flattered!  Hug to you, Island Man, Linda  |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Happy for you and write a poem on DRIVING HOME. Tom |
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