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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2008-01-14 06:59 PM



January Thaw

Turned away from the peaks of illustrious days
Back toward the shore where the Maram grass sways
Bergs standing guard a horizon of white
Sparkling as thoughts that reflect the first light
Musing after the cold of a long winter wait
Not so sure or so ready to accept hibernate
It seems long in the darkness past first snow’s denote
Growing tired of layers all too heavy the coat
Though the snow sheds delight of its own swell accord
Somehow taking the warmth that I can ill afford
When the sky turns so suddenly blue as your eyes
That diffinitive heat takes the chill by surprise
In the process of winter, just a respite of spring
Simple smiles of January thaw everything

Copyright Kkh 1/14/08

© Copyright 2008 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-01-14 07:44 PM


Oh that first hint of spring after a chilly winter.  What a treat. I enjoyed this.  Joyce
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2 posted 2008-01-14 08:13 PM


Fine imagery…such as:

Bergs guarding a white horizon;

Sparkling thoughts reflecting first light;

...about the grand-fine January “respite of spring”

applause!

passing shadows
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3 posted 2008-01-14 09:31 PM


beautifully written!


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4 posted 2008-01-19 07:13 PM


WOW, this was Great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Magnus
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5 posted 2008-01-20 08:30 PM


Yep, before you know, it will be spring and
the heater won't run nearly as long as
before....But those snow trails ....fun,
aren't they?

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6 posted 2008-01-23 01:38 AM


This is very beautiful.
Tom.

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