Open Poetry #41 |
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still hoping to see her |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho ![]() |
it was as verbose as I would ever hope it to be on any fall morn memorizing carefully pieces that would later be written into something which would echo the lines as I ease through the breeze along the leaves that orange lay coruscating around ponds cyan chill and onward to hear the icy tones of what's to come as breezes crisp the naked cheeks and reckless winds are slowing bones autumn's inspiration trickles as surely as seasons sleep me I just drift on the quaint precipice of days begin where I read you but then other times the tarn has left rippled reminisce of all the bittersweet reflections which indeed can & oft times are nothing more than sniveling heartaches what I really ought to ask is why it is I come to find such reflecting revolt that are after all mine but after taking a gander that day into those ghostly eyes of a muse I knew who'd been stealthily filed rippling through the pristine pure well that was down right dirty pool and there I had to leave a tear nevertheless I come ever still hoping to see her [This message has been edited by lucky (01-16-2008 06:16 AM).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dale... this is lovely... I hope you see her again.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Roniece thank you, I still keep a candle burning... James thank a you sir, how's the weather over there..? (smile) best regards dale |
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