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Open Poetry #41

[I'm travelling / alone]

shirtless
Member

since 2006-04-29

Posts 359

0 posted 2008-01-10 03:42 PM

I’m travelling
alone
on the near invisible
seemingly
endless
road

when a bleary-eyed car
is squeezed
from the womb
of heavy fog

as it passes
I see
the mirror
of his face

and know
that he too
has not reached
that blissful centre
within
the roundabout
of birth
and death

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TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

1 posted 2008-01-11 12:40 PM

what a truth. Every one is traveling alone.
And alone we see many empty eyes
many spiritless souls
many lifeless lives
many wondered minds
and alone we travel along our own path.

enjoyed
TM

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-01-11 06:09 AM

quote:
when a bleary-eyed car
is squeezed
from the womb
of heavy fog

Awesome in content and poetic expression.

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2008-01-11 12:11 PM

I agree with Margharita, I think this is great poetic expession.
Ida

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2008-01-16 06:27 AM

I do love your work Anthony...

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

simon
Member

since 2008-01-14

Posts 440
London, England

5 posted 2008-01-16 07:16 AM

I thought this was great. So simple yet says so much...

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