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A Moment... |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
HERE IT COMES...! NOW! NOW! NOW! NOW NOW now now now. It's Gone Forever. |
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Im not a poet and i no it Junior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 14uk, peterborough |
i wonder what u mean by that? maybe time?? |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is interesting. I like the way you try to capture that fleeting moment. Ida |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
and yet... ::smiles:: |
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tonyV Junior Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 36 |
Strange, but awesome. The moment you try to capture a moment, it's never there. There is just the present, how can there be anything else? |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Simon  moments are precious aren't they! well done love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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xrobxscottx Junior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 31United States |
That fleeting moment passes by and all that is left is the memory of what was, not what is, or what is to be. Capture the present and you shall be forever the wisest man alive. Try to capture what has left and you shall see that you are a fool with a dream - a dream that will never come true. >.>; Nice little expression there though! I liked it. It was a little simple, but then again the finer things in life are the little ones. ^^ |
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tonyV Junior Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 36 |
I couldn't have said that any better, Rob. Kudos. |
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