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HellxWeaver
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since 2008-01-13
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0 posted 2008-01-13 02:07 PM



Guilt (Don't)

Don't
Don't let it inside,
Misery, guilt destruction of you.
(Could it be true?)
Don't
Don't ruin your life for me,
Feeling for all but yourself.
(Is it true?)
Don't
Don't run from your mistakes,
Ruins in your wake.
(It must be true!)
Don't
Don't disobey your heart,
It will never lie to you.
(It is true...!)
Don't
Don't let it hold you back.
Don't
Don't feel guilty for me.

If you wonder why,
Why I decide to cry?
Answers will come to you,
The sad truth it will behold,
Life builds character
(life builds character?)
I LOVE IT!
So--
Don't, don't worry,
About me.

{end}

Black Christmas

Have you ever had a nightmare?
Hope you have, get ready for more!

I'm dreaming,
Of a black Christmas,
A dream gone bad,
Looking for a window,
To my soul.

I'm dreaming,
Of a black Christmas,
Just like the ones I've always known,
I'll have my Christmas, alone.


Make my Christmas good,
Walk away.

I understand people,
I'm OK.

You wash your hands of me,
I see.

Another somber picture,
How it will be.
I'm dreaming,
Of a black Christmas,
Just like the ones I've always known,
I'll have my Christmas, alone.
I'll have my Christmas, alone....

{End}


Dying Concerto

Imagine it-- the last, sad song of a violin and violinist pair.

Believe it-- the dead's melancholy grin.

Trust it-- we know the reasons why----

Access Denied!


We’re all walking,

To a single song,

A song a lifetime away from birth,

The Dying Concerto,

Write in-between the lines!!
One must die for the other to live,

Greater good, greater good,

One must live or we all will die.


We all walk,

To a single song,

A song a lifetime away from birth,

The Dying Concerto,

God left with it too.


Messiah, if you let them burn than surely shall I!

Save my brethren.

Who’s your God now?

Twisted cross bearers,

Controlling the crowd.


{END}

© Copyright 2008 Nicholas Weaver - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2008-01-14 11:57 PM


Dear Nicholas,

Welcome to Passions!

It is much easier for the poets here to critique one poem at a time, as I see that your critique window is acceptable to such. There is no need to put several poems into one post; you've time to make yourself comfortable here.

I look forward to seeing more of your poetry, one at a time!



" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2008-01-15 01:24 AM


I feel alot of hurt going on inside there,
someone has left you, right at a time,
like Christmas, when it was to be the
happiest.

WELCOME TO PIP...

Sending hugs your way~
ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2008-01-15 05:32 PM


Welcome Nicholas!  you have shown a piece of your heart in these words... enjoyed.  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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