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tonyV Junior Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 36 |
empty request Lay me 6 feet deep defuse my electric current curse my killer kiss my mother morose is their mood moonlight become their healer hero I hope I'm remembered rejoice but do not creak cremate my breathless vehicle venal world no more mourn for the possessed merely an empty request |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Oh My Tony, I felt so depressed, after reading this, yes, it made me feel empty... and it made me feel as if you are speaking, and no one is listening, and that nothing is ever going to change. I am thinking of a soldier? Wishing you sunshine~ ~ARH You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Tony, This is sad, but it compelled me to read a few times. Welcome to PiP - I look forward to reading more poetry from you. Thank you for taking the time to respond to some of my poems. Again, welcome. Alison |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Welcome Tony to our pages blue... this is rather a sad post... hope to read more of you in happier times... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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