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Winter Storm |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Winter Storm evening bells waver a sad winter wind plays the bonewood trees and dancing snow all paths…hidden memories call joy hides in such loneliness! ~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"a sad winter wind plays the bonewood trees" Wish I had written that! |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Secondhanddreampoet, This is a good description of the lovely, cold, loneliness of a winter storm in the woods. It brings back fond memories, been there. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
How strange that loneliness can be so sad and yet so beautiful at the same time. Ida |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
evening bells waver ... the perfect scenery to give me goosebumps for the intensity of feelings you evoke. Wonderful! love margherita |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Isn't the Bonewood tree one that bears bright fruit in winter? If so, an interesting placement in this poem. This write combines the senses in a fine mix of hearing, sight, the choreography of snow... that which we can see / that which we can only imagine. |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
PS: I read this again today thinking 'how very Magritte of you' to include the Bonewood tree in this winter scene. Smiling. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Just lovely, beautiful! I remember snows so deep like that, watching out the window at night, it was like magic powder dust blowing about in the wind.....and knowing there was no school because of it, well, that just made it even more magical~lol! ~ARH |
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