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Treagal
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since 2008-01-08
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0 posted 2008-01-15 12:19 PM



Selling another's soul
For a nights restful sleep.
Undermining the sanctity
Of all lives lived.

Sentenced to die with no face
With no say in the matter
With no say.

But if they did
I'm sure they'd say:
I want to live.
I want to give.
I want to be.

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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2008-01-15 01:40 PM


Well said, Treagal.
               Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-01-15 05:20 PM


Yes, you are right. This has great impact.

love
Margherita

xrobxscottx
Junior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 31
United States
3 posted 2008-01-15 05:34 PM


Nicely done! I enjoyed that.
A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2008-01-15 10:03 PM


Yes, and you said it for them...

~ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

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