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The essence of my other
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The essence of my other |
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kudanesh Member
since 2007-12-01
Posts 135Peterborough,England |
The essence of my other I have found this tangibility that I have longed to feel This feeling of triumph and the feeling of someone else's love It is there and so tantalizing close Like the friendliness of a butterfly And as pleasant as the smell of a flower The grace of a swan and the flow of a summer breeze Her eyes are as deep deep pools of beauty The skin of a milky white and velvet to the touch Smartness of all and the wisdom of old When I am there with her it becomes a warm summers day With a lovely blue sky and birds full of song I could get lost in her mind so deep and full of knowledge Where would I begin and were would I end I know I feel great love for her Can I show how I feel now I hope I have done |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Were would I begin and were would I end" W(h)ere...instead of were.... You are a separate entity, always, even when you merge with a spirit-mate. An enjoyable read! (Thank you for reading my Cosmic Evolution post!) [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (01-12-2008 08:55 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...a pleasure to read...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
When I am there with her it becomes a warm summers day With a lovely blue sky and birds full of song ... oh, dear Andrew, you are beautifully inspired! It's fantastic to merge, to feel as one, but yes as Kacy says, we preserve our individuality nonetheless. love, margherita  |
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