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Open Poetry #41

'Deep-Time' Serenade

secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-01-07 07:40 PM

     'Deep-Time'
      Serenade

    fine crescent
      moon
    catching stars…

    sky, lake, and
      mind
    become one.

    ‘Deep-Time’
      sings!

            ~

Midnitesun

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Gaia

1 posted 2008-01-07 07:43 PM

And it is an eternally beautiful melody!

TomMark
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2 posted 2008-01-07 07:49 PM

and Lady Midnitesun is very right.

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2008-01-07 09:03 PM

And a lovely song too.
Ida

Margherita
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4 posted 2008-01-09 12:54 PM

I hear the song, you caught it well!

Beautiful!

Margherita

passing shadows
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5 posted 2008-01-10 09:59 AM

gorgeous!

ArtSolstice
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6 posted 2008-01-10 10:14 AM

I especially like the sweep of your choreography in this writing. Beautiful!

vandana

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7 posted 2008-01-10 05:56 PM

good read

Bobby Jordan
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8 posted 2008-01-10 10:25 PM

Secondhanddreampoet,

Fine work, but winter time is not the time to sit by the lake.

It makes me feel cold.

Bobby

Midnitesun

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Gaia

9 posted 2008-01-12 05:42 PM

LOL at Bobby's response.

TomMark
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10 posted 2008-01-12 11:44 PM

a frozen lake in mind makes me even colder.

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