Open Poetry #41 |
coffee and a scion |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mosey town will always be glass and gravel the metal sounds of hurry time pressed soft sided down there will be your eyes on mornings bringing some new day dawn and my mind will worship there at the seam of the wisher's galloping when there rides my mind leatherless exposed to the wind counting the spending of your words golden mouthfuls with saliva just a whisper now and then to feed the starvation of my virginity ___________ daark |
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Clang Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222 |
Interesting. Most mornings I drink my coffee pondering life as a grasshopper. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend clang...enjoyed the comment, thank you |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
The want for more? Or new? Or both...enjoy the dream, and have another cup of coffee, mister. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kahlil...always more..can one ever get enough..coffee? thanks lady friend |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
your morning coffee scene spices my evening chamomile tea atmosphere ... Always a pleasure reading you, Poet! Love, Margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
there will be your eyes on mornings bringing some new day dawn and my mind will worship there I like these lines Mr Daark.... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Yvette Junior Member
since 2007-12-08
Posts 19Texas, United States |
I have read you before. Your metaphors are synaptic. Thanks again. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks to you for the sipping side smile. _____________ ms r & b, thank you for looking into this piece ms. ________________ ms yvette, thank you for the texas eyes..you make me smile ms |
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