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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-01-08 06:32 AM

there was something in your eyes then
when wishes were horses
and you spoke of riding

and of naughty sided sundays
where there was still more
that needed to be touched

by a stranger with familiar hands
that wasn't afraid of windows
or mirrors or even him

being part of your forest
when your trees needed watering
not just a pattering rain

but the love of flooding

____________

daark

Clang
Member

since 2005-12-15

Posts 222

1 posted 2008-01-08 08:29 AM

Mmm...love the imagery. Good work.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2008-01-08 10:20 AM

loved this

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2008-01-08 10:23 AM

One of my favorite lines,

"when wishes were horses..."

Wonderful touch to this, Sir.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2008-01-08 04:54 PM

by a stranger with familiar hands
that wasn't afraid of windows
or mirrors or even him

very nice Mr Daark... a stranger with familiar hands, I like this... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2008-01-08 05:10 PM

friend clang, thank you

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ms suesea, thanks babe

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ms sun, always you smile me, thanks lady

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ms R & B, thank you for looking under this one ms

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2008-01-11 04:13 AM

Magnificent.

Poignant. To say the least.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2008-01-11 06:22 AM

ms K' thank you for the eyes here

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2008-01-11 06:52 AM

you never fail to enchant!

love
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2008-01-11 03:27 PM

ms mar, thanks babe for the touch and thoughts

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

10 posted 2008-01-13 06:26 PM

There is so much in this poem to find special. I won't try to pull each one out, I'll just savor the entire piece.

A

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2008-01-14 06:40 AM

ms az, please take your time..I enjoy your eyes, thank you so much

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