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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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and now in the preamble to endeavor just the clicking fingers pressing equations into bowels stuffication of momentary will the wires confine our love slender they thread their twine lines the gypsy copperbacks serpenting through a whisperer's mountain your tears are my water bowl as I hound with panting envy there at your knees with residue of a child's praying dust to be your saint and sinner's skin a long coat you hurry your arms inside when wet from your favorite nightmares shimmering for resolution's blotter and the moments you have known my name ____________ daark |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
I had come on here soolely to do some moderating in the Teen Forum until I saw the title of your write... I am so glad I took that extra few seconds to read it. This is truly an amazing write. What would you attempt to do...if you knew you could not fail?. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
to be your saint and sinner's skin a long coat you hurry your arms inside when wet from your favorite nightmares shimmering for resolution's blotter and the moments you have known my name I like the idea of slipping my arms into your long coat Mr Daark  enjoyed RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ringo, thanks my friend for the review. _________________ ms R & B, thanks lady friend... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
mmm... just came back for another look Mr Daark... I do like your words here... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r & b...please return often if you like..I appreciate your eyes |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
your tears are my water bowl as I hound with panting envy there at your knees with residue of a child's praying dust Such powerful emotion emanates from your words! love Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
makes me sigh, as usual |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend ___________ ms dixie, you bless me, as usual, thanks babe |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I saved this one, D. It's just amazing - and is among my favorites of yours. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms vandana, thanks lady _______________ ms az, thank you babe for reading and considering this |
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