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Open Roads |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Iam going through this way, Iam going through this day, Iam driving through this roads, Walking distance, From away, Away to the heaven Walking through open roads, Looking at the open skies Skies above, I see a picture rainbow, at the sky Starng at a sun, Iam on the roads, Listen to my radio, Iam driving through this lonely nights, Where the stars bright, Iam going through a lot, This time I will make it right, I will make it through these open roads I know, Time runs by, And Iam still on the road, Iam still a lonely person, With a broken heart, Finding my path to love, Hoping it will last forever Iam driving through this open road, Open road.... |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
I enjoyed your poem. Nicely done. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
I like this one. The voice went stronger and stronger in my ears. enjoyed TM |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
It sounds like you are on quite a journey. I liked this, vandana. Well done. Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Time runs by, And Iam still on the road, I am still a lonely person, With a broken heart, Finding my path to love Beautifully rendered yearning, dear vandana! love, Margherita  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Vandana... this is lovely ! love RDB  Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...may you find someone with a heart as ready as yours...that will accept you and appreciate you...James |
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