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vandana
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0 posted 2008-01-10 06:08 PM



Iam going through this way,
Iam going through this day,
Iam driving through this roads,
Walking distance,
From away,
Away to the heaven
Walking through open roads,
Looking at the open skies
Skies above,
I see a picture rainbow,
at the sky
Starng at a sun,
Iam on the roads,
Listen to my radio,
Iam driving through
this lonely nights,
Where the stars bright,
Iam going through a lot,
This time
I will make it right,
I will make it through
these open roads
I know,
Time runs by,
And Iam still on the road,
Iam still a lonely person,
With a broken heart,
Finding my path
to love,
Hoping it will last forever
Iam driving through this open road,
Open road....

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Tim
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1 posted 2008-01-10 06:31 PM


I enjoyed your poem.  Nicely done.
TomMark
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2 posted 2008-01-10 06:37 PM


I like this one. The voice went stronger and stronger in my ears.
enjoyed
TM

aziza
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3 posted 2008-01-13 05:58 PM


It sounds like you are on quite a journey.

I liked this, vandana.  Well done.

Alison

Margherita
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4 posted 2008-01-14 12:56 PM


Time runs by,
And Iam still on the road,
I am still a lonely person,
With a broken heart,
Finding my path
to love



Beautifully rendered yearning, dear vandana!

love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2008-01-16 04:32 AM


Vandana... this is lovely !  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2008-01-18 02:16 PM


Lovely...may you find someone with a heart as ready as yours...that will accept you and appreciate you...James
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