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Open Poetry #41

Winter Poet-Dreams

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2008-01-17 06:08 PM

   Winter Poet-Dreams

Put away the noise of
  yesterday…
overlook today’s inevitable
  demise…
come walk this silver-evening
  path
through an ancient land
of endless, snow-velvet hills
in deep-time slumber,
where a sharp Winter
  moon
sails the ebony sea
of scattered clouds
and whispering stars,
mid smoke-mingled
music ascending,
as lonely, poet-heart
  cosmic dreams
of Nature and love’s
  perfection…
are hung on the cusp
of forever!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2008-01-18 05:29 AM

love the thoughts and images, Bruce~~

very soothing
M

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-01-18 05:47 AM

Bruce.. you always write so vividly... loved this beautiful penning of yours... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-01-18 12:26 PM

Again you wrote a highly enjoyable, wonderful winter-scenery.

I love to dwell within your vision.

love
Margherita

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

4 posted 2008-01-18 12:51 PM

truly beautiful.
It was not the word "walk" that lead me into the poem. It is the "sail" that drowned me.
beautiful!!!

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