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Carlos oh Carlos
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Carlos oh Carlos |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Carlos oh Carlos It never hurts to have a hitman for a friend just in case you have to do somebody in. Of course you'll have to introduce him to your friends as a waiter or your insurance man and whatever they can't do a 9mm sure can. Sometimes a little more finesse is required to enforce the outcome that is desired. I'm not saying it moral but its definately mortal, nor is it legal but it tends to be lethal, not necessarily fun and most often fatal. Go ahead and make my day, breathe in your last gasp of fresh air today, for you'll never see tomorrow once the hitman is paid. What you gonna do when he comes for you, perhaps break down and cry just before you die. No man can stop where the hitmans bullets go but Jesus can still save your immortal soul. JamesLee 10January 2008 |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
smiles... I'll make that call to Jesus any day James.... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
James, I'm glad I don't have a hitman as a friend...I sure didn't like jail at all. loved the ending line in this  |
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Clang Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222 |
In my darkest depressions I often longed for death, it doesn't scare me. What I would have done for a hitman friend on those days (for myself, of course). Great poem. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Good . . . John |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Very good, sir. as good as your love poem. enjoyed Tomtoo |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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