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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2008-01-10 03:31 PM


We created a creature,
began with gentle feeding.
Small, it looked at
us with pleading eyes.
So we fed it,
gave it our bodies,
it still wanted more.
Gave it our brains,
it devoured them quickly.
Gave it our heart,
it chewed them, gushing
rich blood onto us.
We pleaded it go,
it went and we
forgot it was there.
Until we slept darkly.
It entered our dreams,
sucked all our past
while we slept shivering.
We woke and pleaded
it come back, we
hated it, but it
was part of us.
We needed it, loathed
it, but wanted it.
''Anything we will give,
come back to us
torment of our souls''
Returning it divided like
a worm, entering us
seperately, crying like a
baby to come back
together to make it
whole, let it pupate.
To hide and metamorph,
shifting shape inside skin
semi-transparent until it
suddenly burst open, split
and opening it's cocoon,
with water gushing out.
Unfurling wings of fire
and colours of flame.
Flying to heaven with
our lives inside its
body, its very wings.

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Clang
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since 2005-12-15
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1 posted 2008-01-10 05:57 PM


This is dark and really cool.  Great write!
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