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Open Poetry #41

On the wing

Frances The Mute
Junior Member

since 2008-01-09

Posts 16
CT, USA

0 posted 2008-01-09 10:23 PM

Its fine for one,
Not another,
To rise Above?
Or to rise against?
For the birn may touch the sun,
Or struck down by an eagle,
Morals cannot be found,
If wings are beating,
The bird wants only life,
As does the eagle,
But neither shall stay airborne,
The winds will not allow it,
to resist is to be compelled,
for few have ever made decisions.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

1 posted 2008-01-09 10:41 PM

Very interesting first post.
I look forward to more.
And welcome to the place!

Frances The Mute
Junior Member

since 2008-01-09

Posts 16
CT, USA

2 posted 2008-01-09 10:49 PM

thanks! im glad to have found somewhere where i can vent. i would post more, but i feel rather lazy and tired at the moment =)

"There is a beast in man that needs to be excersised, not exorcised."

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2008-01-09 10:55 PM

Welcome indeed... I enjoyed your vent!

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2008-01-10 08:26 AM

Welcome to Passions.
Wonderful metaphor in this little morsel.
Very enjoyable.

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