Open Poetry #41 |
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Precious Memories to Carry |
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SouthernJustice Member
since 2007-12-15
Posts 159 |
They wil ever linger, and forever fill my soul with me through the many years and yes I know my darling i did bring thee many tears and many tears of sorrow, yet such tears now forget. Of our time together angel, I have not one regret. I showed off quite a bit, I was o such the clown and yes I know my antics oft left you feeling down. But I know Jesus Has Forgiven me. He holds me in His Arms HE is the King of All Charisma And truly all grace and Charm. Before I leave my darling, and I mean not make thee sigh. One final kiss unitl eternity. Tis farewell, and not goodbye |
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Clang Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222 |
Very sad, forlorn, but romantic. A good piece. I liked the cadence. Enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I never liked farewells or goodbyes myself how sad this poem makes me feel, but in a way, I smiled a bit too I guess that's what you call bittersweet |
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SouthernJustice Member
since 2007-12-15
Posts 159 |
Thank you both, and it IS a "farewell but not goodbye" type poem. Good to hear from you both. "SJ" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
No love bond without tears! But your words contain also a healing message. Beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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SouthernJustice Member
since 2007-12-15
Posts 159 |
TY James and Margarita. "SJ" |
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