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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-09-13 02:09 PM

.

When a morning sun
Is streaming through
The picture window
And the living room
Filled with light
Seems to glow

It is you again
That I look for
The world a moment
Free of dark shadows
The new day shining
On your hair

In that silent pause
Waiting for your eyes
There is no sorrow
A calm forgetful quietude
In the summer air

Perhaps
When time beyond
Becomes of no concern

There will close as well
The distance between us now

.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2007-09-13 04:16 PM

Nice...James

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2007-12-31 02:30 PM

I think this lovely write deserves a second chance.
Ida

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2007-12-31 03:26 PM

THANKS Ida, for bringing this fine 'write' back near
the top of the "P.I.P.-land" queue!

[Somehow (unfortunately) I had missed it initially?!]

serious and sustained applause for this 'penning!'

Irish
Member

since 2006-05-02

Posts 50
Ft Benning

4 posted 2007-12-31 03:49 PM

I don't think I will ever NOT enjoy reading you.

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

5 posted 2007-12-31 05:24 PM

!!!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2008-01-04 01:03 AM

a most stunning write John... Bravo! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2008-01-04 06:17 AM

lovely feelings expressed, John

M

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2008-01-04 12:04 PM

nice read

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

9 posted 2008-01-05 02:40 AM

Ida is right. It is lovely and it does deserve a second chance - if not more. Beautiful, John.

Alison

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