Open Poetry #41 |
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Winter Mere |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! ![]() |
Winter Mere As an ephemeral sunset paints snow-shadowed hills in the finest patina of a Winter evening, and crystal-clear moonlight leaks through the roof of stars, in ethereal flow over fen, field, and forest, a lonely cloud drifts along the gossamer mirror-edge, where water and sky become one… Here, neither sorrow, nor trace of travesty, trial, or tempest, shall linger... on this lake of finest dreams! (B. E. Adams 12/30/07) |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
YES! What a lovely write, gentle as a new fallen snow. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautiful Poem ARCTIC WIND |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and crystal-clear moonlight leaks through the roof of stars, ~*~ Enjoying this, through cloud dusted skies... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
and crystal-clear moonlight leaks through the roof of stars... Love this vision. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: tucking this away for further readings, as I think it's really a fantastic write. Happy New Year, dear Bruce! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
This poem has me wondering if it is in conversation with Wordsworth’s “I wandered lonely as a cloud…” And when you write “a lonely cloud drifts along the gossamer mirror-edge, where water and sky become one… “ I think of Van Gogh’s Irises – the single white one among the indigo faces… |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
fine fine write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
glad to see this again it is lovely |
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