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December Evening
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December Evening |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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December Evening Pensive sun sets... Mysterious moon arrives… (cloud-captured) in a roar of silence, with the frosty breath of twilight, tasting of transience… Though we are but apparitions passing, shadows wavering in the Winter wind, everyone’s story… is a quintessential verse in the music of Life… a vibrant ‘bubble’ in “Deep-time’s” elegant, eternal dance! ~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Bruce... you are wonderful! I love how you express your beautiful words... Happy New Year my friend... RDB  Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes!! It's like making love to the beauty of creation! Wonderful write! Love, Margherita |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
"Pensive sun sets... Mysterious moon arrives… (cloud-captured) in a roar of silence, with the frosty breath of twilight," I don't know who else can write like this. It is a movie rather than a still picture. (Cloud-captured).... I see that moon is struggling to escape, then get caught again on the background of your sun set color. What is your sun set color?! I am not poetic enough to describe it. wonderful poem. always good. Tomtoo |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Enjoyed the enchanted feel of this |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Though we are but apparitions passing, (a)shadow wavering in the Winter wind, ..that is how I feel M |
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