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Open Poetry #41
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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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0 posted 2007-12-28 02:31 AM

singing solo


i want to hug you and hold you
as your words fall about me like petals
of a flower going into its second bloom

engrossed by the poetry of you
caressed by each picture you speak
each thought shared a puzzle piece fitting

tightly in the grip of my fingers

i want to pour you and sip you
like a fine merlot wetting the tip of my tongue
infusing me with creativity that you paint

stimulated by the touch of your images
captured by the wonders of your mind
a song carried to my nighttime windows

tapping a soft song on frosted glass
to let you in and warm chilled corners

---

Alison
© Copyright 2007 Alison - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2007-12-28 02:59 AM

oh Ali... this is very dreamy! loved your words here - hope they come true for you my lovely girl... RDB xx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2007-12-28 06:40 AM

ms az..the voice of a poet speaks in your words..the artist's prayer...you are lovely this way
secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
3 posted 2007-12-28 07:13 AM

This 'write' is simply superb!

I am particularly fond of the ending:

"stimulated by the touch of your images
captured by the wonders of your mind
a song carried to my nighttime windows

tapping a soft song on frosted glass
to let you in and warm chilled corners (!)"

very serious and long-sustained applause!
[a 'poetic standing ovation' for this penning!]

                           ~
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2007-12-28 07:35 AM

beautifully written...
it seems I am feeling you today~~

M
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
5 posted 2007-12-28 12:00 PM

Dear Alison, you have been infused with wonderful inspiration and the result is exquisite to the reader's perception.

An outstanding piece of poetry!

Love,
Margherita
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