navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #41 » bond, jack bond
Open Poetry #41
Post A Reply Post New Topic bond, jack bond Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-12-21 09:23 PM


and then there are the days of owg
that return like paper plates
on wind feet wheels

just a jack n,dan away
from the long legged woman
under the bail bonds sign

without her sighs on
maybe dark glasses
and darker thoughts

of how to burn the ends
of her candles
with slow love handfulls

and you say love words
and make me lose my place
in the gravel I was reading

when you had your best maybe on


________
daark


© Copyright 2007 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved
SEA
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
1 posted 2007-12-21 09:45 PM


"maybe dark glasses
and darker thoughts

of how to burn the ends
of her candles
with slow love handfulls

and you say love words
and make me lose my place"


so so scrumptious!



Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2007-12-21 10:28 PM


ms suesea, thanks for the touch here


aziza
Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
3 posted 2007-12-21 11:03 PM


Wow, I keep reading this and I think I am captured by the way you use words.

A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
4 posted 2007-12-22 06:41 AM


when you had your best maybe on

yes, I'm with Ali on this... wow! lovely words Mr Daark... RDB x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
5 posted 2007-12-22 08:01 AM


ms az..thanks babe...something from the OWG days perhaps..long story.

_____________

ms R & B, thank you for watching ms

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
6 posted 2007-12-22 10:25 AM


MERRY CHRISTMAS

ARCTIC WIND

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
7 posted 2007-12-22 12:04 PM


Thanx AW, ditto the gesture
Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

8 posted 2007-12-22 01:42 PM


oh yessss...I was wondering when we might get a glimpse of the OWG days again...
and the minute I saw the title, I was already smilin....Next to Jim Dickies Birthday Fifth, this is one of my favorite of yours....

Happy Holidays to you, big daddy.  

Mysteria
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada
9 posted 2007-12-22 01:46 PM


and you say love words
and make me lose my place
in the gravel I was reading

when you had your best maybe on

You are just WAY too good at this.  Merry Christmas Easy Rider

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
10 posted 2007-12-22 02:49 PM


ms gs..thanks and jolly holly to ya ms

______________

ms mysteria, thanks lady friend for the replay of some scooter blues...happy C day to you too

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
11 posted 2007-12-22 04:14 PM


Smiling at owg's return, even if
momentarily...

one has to learn the acronyms,
but not always before she appreciates
the poet.


Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
12 posted 2007-12-22 04:29 PM


ms sun, he does miss your eyes on his penspeak, thanks lady...have a wonderful holiday
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
13 posted 2007-12-22 05:43 PM


OWG, and you, have my thoughts over Christmas. Be Merry, m'friend.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
14 posted 2007-12-22 07:48 PM


um... actually I don't really know what an "OWG" is?  am I having a blonde moment here? LOL sorry, but if you don't ask you don't know right?     RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
15 posted 2007-12-22 08:12 PM


ms R & B,,,oh darn...I am keeping you in suspense...keeping the mystery alive perhaps, thanks for being curious.
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
16 posted 2007-12-22 08:24 PM


ok, I know that one should not speak about things one doesn't understand ... so, like Roniece, I am waiting to know what or who owg is ...

It's a night of mysteries!

Love,
Margherita

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
17 posted 2007-12-22 08:59 PM


you know how
to love a woman
you are blessed
love you darkdaddy
merry christmas

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
18 posted 2007-12-22 09:22 PM


ms mar, thank you for your eyes here...perhaps in time the owg will be known to you.

_____________

ms inky, bless you with naughty whispers lady love, thank you for the touch and enjoy, please your holiday time

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
19 posted 2007-12-24 02:46 AM


Fine writing...James
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
20 posted 2007-12-24 04:47 AM


thanks james...you are appreciated..jolly holly guy
vandana
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
21 posted 2007-12-24 11:57 AM


enjoyed
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
22 posted 2007-12-24 12:08 PM


Long, tall neighbor...the days before the day of today, the OWG time, and yet some things always ride with us.  May you be blessed with paperplates full.  
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
23 posted 2007-12-25 07:41 AM


ms vandan, thank you

______________

ms martie, little neighbor..somedays I feel the highways of you and I cross and slow for moments...then hurry on again in otherwise directions..be well lady friend..thanks to you

Yvette
Junior Member
since 2007-12-08
Posts 19
Texas, United States
24 posted 2007-12-27 06:38 PM


Gravel I was reading

Bleedin' brilliant...

I also loved the lack of capitalization.  I don't always, but it took me further into the shadowy place you took me to.

Thank you...odd, delightful and wonderful.

All the darkness in the universe cannot extinguish the light of a single, burning candle.

bel1e
Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631

25 posted 2007-12-27 07:49 PM


Ol' White Guy~~~

damn..it has been a minuet, darkie...for sure~nice to see you riding ~~~

~~bbg


     

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
26 posted 2007-12-28 06:41 AM


ms yvette...the capitals I have known have always been such a let down..wink..why ruin friendly words by punishing them with special letters..thanks babe
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #41 » bond, jack bond

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary