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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
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0 posted 2007-12-27 06:19 AM



few minute candy
the small piece sweetness
never can have enough size

they say you fell in
like it was love one time
and got it all over you

couldn't get back out again
until lonely rescued you
with a floating anvil

now you are a saint statue
on the dash of my ranchero
wearing a grass skirt and boots

and other body armor too
lest you become fragile again
and you love me sometime slightly

just for licking off your coating


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daark

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Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

1 posted 2007-12-27 09:10 AM


she fell into a vat of chocolate...
that's why she shakes shakey shakes on the dash
to remind you, she enjoyed the ride

SEA
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with you
2 posted 2007-12-27 11:48 AM


is someone having a sugar drop?

makes me think, melts in your mouth not in your hands...

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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3 posted 2007-12-27 01:02 PM


Maybe

-- smiles --

she needs a partner to kiss when you hit the bumps in the road.  Like those kissing dolls that go in the back window - has to be some way to diffuse the heat of a dashboard princess.

A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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4 posted 2007-12-27 05:54 PM


:smiles:  you sure do have a way with words and hidden meanings Mr Daark... :smiles:  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
5 posted 2007-12-28 06:45 AM


ms kahlil...she is a bit dark...in places in her mind perhaps..thanks babe

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ms suesea, I love how you think hon, thanks


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ms az, perhaps you have given me the clue to the riddle.  thanks for looking in

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ms R & B...do you enjoy what is between the lines?, thanks lady friend

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