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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
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0 posted 2007-12-21 12:16 PM




Last of the running,
The last of each river
That stole the walkways
Of the stories that
Will be told between father and daughter.

Like a ring
That wont shed its diamonds
Upon a finger
That twists like a lace
Fitted between her sweaters top.

A never-ending tale,
Except his hands wore,
His feet were spun so wide
He took one glance
And said he could go no further.

A legends fall,
The glimpses they use
To give one another
When the winter trees
Lay naked with the
Fins of their branches lipping the air
That use to seal their walks.

He never said farewell,
His heart gave out
As the way his brown sleeves of hair
Became gray,

Much like the way
The lake that sat
Behind their house
Up until his last winter.


© Copyright 2007 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
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1 posted 2007-12-21 12:42 PM


beautiful and heavy, very heavy!!!!!!

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