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black watch hollow
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black watch hollow |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the black's men were at the oar like ho'ers of a gypsy oceans shoveling their emerald snow since the autumn has been emptied of the piper's bulging weep down the dawns of soulful yarns lest the cities cancer her smiles with concrete teeth and tongues devouring with gutless hunger and panting through their gills out of water except their tears like snow fires roasting rosaries and the black watch is hollow now __________ daark scribblenote..to do with some brothers of the watch and bag pipes and somebody's mountains |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very much enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
hungry for more understanding on this one...usually your poetry plays on my imagination....off to read more. JAC ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
since the autumn has been emptied of the piper's bulging weep down the dawns of soulful yarns This is quite an intricate story ... it's not within my grasp, but your poetic rage impresses me nonetheless! Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
artic, thanks for the read ________ ms angel...has to do with the black watch...bagpipes..some bros that no longer ride..a little highlander ditty thanks lady _____________ ms mar, a highlander view in tribute of some Celtic rites etc.... how death only gets empty things to hold to her bosom... thanks lady friend |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Even your replies can be poetic in tone... I'm sorry for your loss... I hope this friend is in a better place... may he live on in your memories, m'friend. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This is haunting. I read it and read it -- and I keep coming back. It's a keeper, my friend. Alison |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...it is kind of a traditional thing...in honor of a few..better place? not sure about that...but it was by choice in any event...thanks babe ______________ ms az, don't be haunted...it is a healing really...it just has cold hands. thanks ms |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
No not haunting as in haunting .. I mean as in lingering ... mesmerizing ... Ya know? A |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, Alison...he knows. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az..thanks hon... __________ ms sun, and thanks to you too |
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