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Open Poetry #41

king tsunamis

EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2007-12-20 09:21 PM

King Tsunamis

The world I’ve created is an aimless wonder bordering on the chaotic
I recall a talking bird on a broken pirate ship, stranded in some backyard
A decrepit relic of old, splintered wood
the Green parrot gave a chilling stare
I remember in my heart the castle I visited
,,Flying on that ominous and deadly zip line of rope and boards..
..Holding on tightly for my life..
..Would I die if I fall?..
Those cursed castles
Were so beautiful
They seemed so ancient
Falling apart
Forgotten vestiges of a world I never knew
From another corner of the closet

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2007-12-20 09:37 PM

I know those beautiful castles, Eagle Scorpion. I like the way you remember them too.
Ida

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2007-12-20 11:33 PM

There are several kinds of closets;
some are real;
some are of the heart;
some are just around
a corner;
and some...and in tomorrow.

I enjoyed this, Joseph...

Very much.

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

3 posted 2007-12-22 06:02 PM

i must correct this for the sake of honesty

the bird never spoke...

and was four feet tall.

im glad you enjoyed.

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