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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-12-20 06:40 AM



and still there are the drums
of night strumming summers
monotone lovely in murmuring

when my occasions are your solitaire
counting the hours before dawn
the pleasures of another man's jewel

when living with rental agreements
adultery is only part time heavenly
but then there are the masks

of reality all must model sometimes
when they holiday with the others
petting strange animals with their eyes

wishing the season ended in september

__________

daark


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1 posted 2007-12-20 09:01 AM


"but then there are the masks

of reality all must model sometimes
when they holiday with the others
petting strange animals with their eyes"

yep...


Margherita
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2 posted 2007-12-20 06:31 PM


Another incredibly powerful message,
truth and reality offered in highly poetic attire.

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2007-12-20 10:31 PM


yes Mr Daark, I like this!
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

aziza
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4 posted 2007-12-20 11:00 PM


I like this too.

Yep, I do.

A

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2007-12-21 06:33 AM


ms suesea, thanks lady friend...you please me


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ms mar, thank you for looking in this window ms

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ms R & B thank you for watching

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ms az, thanks little one, you smile me

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