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Open Poetry #41

That

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2007-12-18 12:19 PM

That was love,
That was us,
Didn't you know that,
That was our music,
That was our story,
That was our eerything,
Anything was there,
Life seems full of colors,
That was love,
Some more,
So much more than that,
That was a letter,
Writen by you,
From a heart,
That was a heart,
That was love never like before,
It was all that love,
That would last forever,
That was us,
That was our hearts,
Our love,
That was our special moment,
That was our sound of heart,
I can hear our heart beat aloud,
That was love enough
to lift our faith high
That was love to stand up
That was all,
to fill our hearts,
That was us to fall
That was us to call,
That was everything,
everything....

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

1 posted 2007-12-18 12:43 PM

This is good

John

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2007-12-18 02:23 PM

Oh my friend, how your words have grown. This is lovely dear Vandanna.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2007-12-18 06:01 PM

That was love enough
to lift our faith high
That was love to stand up
That was all,

Yet again, dear Vandana, you wrote
a beautiful love poem filled with deep longing.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2007-12-18 06:23 PM

"That" was absolutely beautiful. Your poems of love are always so gentle and highly expressive.

May you be loved as you do love!

Loving hug,

EA

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-12-19 03:14 PM

Yes love can touch so many emotions and seem like everything...James

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