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Katerine Collaudemus
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Katerine Collaudemus |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Red and gold Blue to green And all the colors In between Beneath a winter Starry sky Even the moon That old man Who has seen so much Seems however faintly To have a smile Snow lies white On silent fields Deer move as shadows Among the trees By the window A single candle burns Ever faithful To the dream . |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ohhh John, this is such a lovely and serene peace you write, and quite honestly, my favorite of yours so far. Excellent work here. Happy holidays to you, sir. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
By the window A single candle burns Ever faithful To the dream ... "ever faithful to the dream" ... tiptoeing out of this magical scenery with a feeling of beauty and harmony. Very good! Love, Margherita  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a very fine 'write'... [as I have come to expect from this author!] I am particularly fond of the ending: "Snow lies white On silent fields Deer move as shadows Among the trees By the window A single candle burns Ever faithful To the dream" serious and sustained applause!! |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Listened the available seconds of Katerine Collaudemus on Amazon, I allowed myself to have different feelings based on my experience. It was the feeling that I was in the pine forest and everything was dark and only when you look -up, there was the light. Then I was 11 yrs. A pure young soul wanted to connect to the higher beings. Now, I am back to earth and knowing that He is there so I am more intending to connect the souls around me. Believe me, I could hardly make meditations to this music. too surreal. well, it meant to be surreal. Beautiful poem and the end "By the window A single candle burns Ever faithful To the dream" is the soul of the music. and of your poem too. again, beautiful poem. have a wonderful day, dear John. [This message has been edited by TomMark (12-19-2007 02:51 PM).] |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Serene and beautiful, much enjoyed. Ida |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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