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Nature and Imagination
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Nature and Imagination |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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On Nature and Imagination When you can… feel a whirlwind in the calmest air find infinite wisdom in a slowly drifting cloud sense your spirit’s oneness with the deep-rooted rocks and trees see all tomorrows’ promises in a crystal-clear, moonlit lake taste the ambrosia in an empty bowl smell the breath of winter pines and ocean mists in the desert rejoice in transience and change hear your every atom singing of eternity… only then shall you know the truest ‘way!’ ~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"feel a whirlwind in the calmest air" and "taste the ambrosia in an empty bowl" Such beautiful imagery, Zenfully delicious! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Your full of descriptive beautiful words  ARCTIC WIND |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Such a beautiful map that you unfold for us. I am learning to read it. Thank you, Bruce, for sharing such beauty. Alison |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"only then shall you know the truest ‘way!" ... and then "life" turns one away - must be the best and most effective conspiracy of all.  Always enjoy your poems. Thank you. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
I generally read you poem is one breath to sense the strong emotion of it. Now, the break down give me break so it moves slow and more romantic. beautiful as always Tomtoo Have a wonderful weekend sir Bruce. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You know, dear Bruce, I am doing this all the time, my favorite imagination ... Your minimalistic universal Poem makes me question the length of the poem I wrote last night ... but then it's done and I'll leave it the way it is (I will compensate with some senryu and haiku!). A wonderful offering! Love, Margherita |
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Thalen Junior Member
since 2007-12-15
Posts 35New Jersey, USA |
I like this, is a good description, used with good vocabulary. I would just prefer to see some capital letters. :3 |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Bruce... how wonderful this is!! I love it! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Which one of these challenges to I like best? So difficult to choose only one! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is so beautiful and meaningful, Bruce. It takes my breath away. Ida |
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