Open Poetry #41 |
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Merry Christmas |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands ![]() |
What's in a black hole? ![]() This is, alas, what some people will see, a hole as black, as black can be. But I looked closer, deep down the hole and saw some nurture for my soul. ![]() I saw a web, fresh made at dawn, when frost still covered winter's lawn. The spider's waiting in the dark, well hidden, or she'll be caught by any lark. ![]() I saw a creek, in Autumn's golden gown, with leaveless trees and reed turned orange brown. The silence, it could be almost heard, was broken by the song, of a lonely bird. ![]() I saw a mill, which vanes were slowly turning and to the past, my heart was yearning. When cars and planes were not around and the tread of horses was a natural sound. ![]() I saw a church, in evening's sunset glow, where faith and hope in people's heart still grow. I saw all that, when I looked down the hole, which seemed so black, but lightened up my soul. MERRY CHRISTMAS TO ALL MY PIP FRIENDS |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TitiaDearTitia~ This is SO GORGEOUS~ How lifting are both your photographs and your poetic thoughts~ You are such a talent~ ![]() Merry Christmas to you and yours also, dearest lady~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...reminds me of the times I look at the moon and can see the face of Jesus...James |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful !!! |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WOW! This is SO beautiful....really enjoyed this ![]() |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
So beautifully penned dear Titia, and the pictures are awesome. Merry Christmas to you and your family. ((((hugs)))) Charisma |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Ah, Titia, a very beautiful poem and and images and great wisdoms. You are very right. If some one want to study history of everything, better go to Black Hole. Lots love to you and mom and a very merry Christmas to you and wish you a wonderful new year. Tom |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
SO VERY VERY BEAUTIFUL TITIA!! A very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you and yours. Hugs~Nancy |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Very nice, I don't go looking down any black holes in my neck of the woods... skunks, bobcats, critters. nice work on the photos... oh, I just realized "critter" is used for people sometimes... Oh well... back to the top dale |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
So orginal! Truly you made magic. Thank you. "late" |
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Vintage_wings New Member
since 2007-11-26
Posts 4South Carolina, USA |
Hi Titia: Wonderful photos, inspiring verse. I think it's just great. Bob DeBurgh |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I LOVE those photos ARCTIC WIND |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Titia: This is a masterpiece! What a terrific combination of writing and photos. Merry Christmas to you and your family. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Titia, if this were in book form I would buy it! You are incredibly gifted as a photographer, and poet m'friend. Just beautifully done, and presented. ![]() ![]() |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Well done, both writings and photography. You are a true artist. Joyce |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Absolutely enchanting piece, Titia -- you are so very creative! Wishing you a joyous Christmas, too, and thank you for your wish! ![]() |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
absolutely beautiful, Titia... Merry Christmas, my friend... ![]() "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Titia, no one is as clever with a camera as you. This is just fabulous! Wishing you and yours a very Merry Christmas and peace and health for the coming New Year. hugs and loves, Marti |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Titia There is so much beauty all around...you've proved that in your "black hole". Thank you! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thank you, thank you old and new friends. May Christmas give you all you want, but above all: peace in mind and heart. Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Merry CHRISTMAS ![]() |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I don't know whats more beautiful...the thought, the poem or the pictures ![]() Ruth |
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