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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2007-12-16 04:38 PM



What's in a black hole?



This is, alas, what some people will see,
a hole as black, as black can be.
But I looked closer, deep down the hole
and saw some nurture for my soul.



I saw a web, fresh made at dawn,
when frost still covered winter's lawn.
The spider's waiting in the dark,
well hidden, or she'll be caught by any lark.



I saw a creek, in Autumn's golden gown,
with leaveless trees and reed turned orange brown.
The silence, it could be almost heard,
was broken by the song, of a lonely bird.



I saw a mill, which vanes were slowly turning
and to the past, my heart was yearning.
When cars and planes were not around
and the tread of horses was a natural sound.



I saw a church, in evening's sunset glow,
where faith and hope in people's heart still grow.
I saw all that, when I looked down the hole,
which seemed so black, but lightened up my soul.




MERRY CHRISTMAS TO ALL MY PIP FRIENDS
© Copyright 2007 Titia Geertman - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2007-12-16 04:50 PM


TitiaDearTitia~
This is SO GORGEOUS~
How lifting are both your photographs and your poetic thoughts~

You are such a talent~

Merry Christmas to you and yours also, dearest lady~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-12-17 04:18 AM


Wonderful...reminds me of the times I look at the moon and can see the face of Jesus...James
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3 posted 2007-12-17 04:30 AM


beautiful !!!
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WOW! This is SO beautiful....really enjoyed this
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5 posted 2007-12-17 01:04 PM


So beautifully penned dear Titia, and the pictures are awesome. Merry Christmas to you and your family.

((((hugs))))

Charisma

TomMark
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6 posted 2007-12-17 01:08 PM


Ah, Titia, a very beautiful poem and and images and great wisdoms.
You are very right. If some one want to study history of everything,  better go to Black Hole.

Lots love to you and mom and

a very merry Christmas to you and wish you a wonderful new year.

Tom

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7 posted 2007-12-17 01:14 PM


SO VERY VERY BEAUTIFUL TITIA!!
A very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you and yours.
Hugs~Nancy

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8 posted 2007-12-17 01:35 PM


Very nice,

I don't go looking down any black holes in my
neck of the woods... skunks, bobcats, critters.
nice work on the photos... oh, I just realized
"critter" is used for people sometimes... Oh
well...

back to the top
dale

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9 posted 2007-12-17 01:47 PM


So orginal!  Truly you made magic. Thank you. "late"
Vintage_wings
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10 posted 2007-12-17 05:47 PM


Hi Titia:
Wonderful photos, inspiring verse. I think it's just great.
Bob DeBurgh

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11 posted 2007-12-17 06:36 PM


I LOVE those photos

ARCTIC WIND

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12 posted 2007-12-17 07:25 PM


Titia:  This is a masterpiece!  What a terrific combination of writing and photos.

Merry Christmas to you and your family.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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13 posted 2007-12-17 08:17 PM


Titia, if this were in book form I would buy it!  You are incredibly gifted as a photographer, and poet m'friend.  Just beautifully done, and presented.  

Zalig Kerstfeast

             
Love, Joy, and Cheer!

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14 posted 2007-12-17 10:04 PM


Well done, both writings and photography.  You are a true artist.  Joyce
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15 posted 2007-12-18 03:03 AM


Absolutely enchanting piece, Titia -- you are so very creative!  

Wishing you a joyous Christmas, too, and thank you for your wish!   ....jo

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16 posted 2007-12-18 03:39 AM


absolutely beautiful, Titia...

Merry Christmas, my friend...

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

Misty Lilacs
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17 posted 2007-12-18 09:24 AM


Titia, no one is as clever with a camera
as you. This is just fabulous!

Wishing you and yours a very Merry
Christmas and peace and health for
the coming New Year.

hugs and loves, Marti

Martie
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18 posted 2007-12-18 10:35 AM


Dear Titia

There is so much beauty all around...you've proved that in your "black hole".  Thank you!

Titia Geertman
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19 posted 2007-12-18 11:16 AM


Thank you, thank you old and new friends.
May Christmas give you all you want, but above all: peace in mind and heart.

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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20 posted 2007-12-18 11:36 AM


Merry CHRISTMAS
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21 posted 2007-12-18 09:28 PM


I don't know whats more beautiful...the thought, the poem or the pictures
Ruth

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