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Inexplicable Sadness
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Inexplicable Sadness |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Tonight, every star counts my sadness, shines on every tear that fills me full, not shed, swallowed deep tonight. ... A [This message has been edited by aziza (12-17-2007 02:17 AM).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh Ali... are you sad tonight? this was beautiful - sending you some  hugs just for you ..RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Fairplay Member
since 2007-01-15
Posts 222England |
why are you sad? Eric |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Roniece Thank you. Just a bit sad - nothing that won't be gone tomorrow. Just a 'get out of the bathtub and capture the moment' kind of sad. Does that make any sense? Anyway, thanks for the butterfly and for making me smile. Alison --- Eric Thanks for asking. It was kind of like capturing a snapshot of emotion. I have read two books in the last few days that have left a lingering impression on me. Both were about children - both hit home and left a bit of an empty feeling. It's just a passing feeling - and I work things out by writing. Alison |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Alison, the hardest tears to hold back are the ones we swollow and hide from others, often it does not take that much to bring on the pain and the heartbreak, but when the moments are over, there is so much to recap and remember, much to write and so much to share. Enjoyed your post here my friend, thank you for sharing. Rick |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I'm pleased you are ok.. yes, I know those moments.. and all your words make sense to me lovely girl...sleep well xx RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You certainly captured that moment...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Aziza- Very touching!  ARCTIC WIND |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Alison honey, let it out it's not good to be that full  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
concise and emotively effective! Applause!! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"not shed, swallowed deep" understand this...shove it down....till there is no more room...then eventually, it will come out... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I know of these moments too, dear Alison. Sometimes when we think it "inexplicable", it's the longing for the Source where we come from ... I believe. Well rendered sadness. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. http://www.illinoispoets.org/poems0606.htm#IfYouMust . If You Must by John Wolf . |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I have those up and down moments every day. Sending some love and smiles your way  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I feel that way too sometimes, Alison. Hope you are feeling better now and enjoy the holidays. Ida |
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Lincoln Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 62Earth |
"Tonight, every star counts my sadness, shines on every tear that fills me full not shed, swallowed deep tonight." beautiful!! "When your deepest thoughts are broken, keep on dreaming boy, cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die." -Shannon Hoon |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
There is such a level of kindness, concern and support on these pages here at PiP. I thank you all for the thoughts expressed about my sad moment - and my writing. John, I especially thank you for sharing the poem - If You Must. It's a keeper and I look forward to spending some time reading in that site. xoxoxo A |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Hey my sweet Ali... today is a new day for you and I'm hoping your blues have gone to be replaced with sunshine and smiles... love RDB xxx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az, you bring clouds back to the sky..hope they leave soon and the sun returns.. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Yep, Yep, Yep, RDB & DS Thank you both and I am doing great! It was a passing moment of introspective sadness. Or something. xoxoxoxo A |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
...this encompasses my spirit like ground mists, not liquid as rain, but more blinding, and I feel moments of winter. Sending a shooting mountain star your way...whose petals sing hot pink, the first sign of spring in the snow laden Rockies. Lovely writing! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Klassy Lassy, Thank you for the beautiful response - your words are poetry too. Merry Christmas to you. xoxoxo A |
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