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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-12-16 05:22 AM


Sharing of Moments

If my honey
is melting
into my arms
what can this
life offer me
that's any sweeter?

She's the only one
I give all of my heart to
with a guarantee for today
yet no promises of tomorrow;
only the sharing of moments,
and in this moment
the sweetness
of her kiss.

JamesLee
15December
2007



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OwlSA
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1 posted 2007-12-16 06:24 AM


You are indeed a lucky man, James.  And the most wonderful thing is that you know it!  However, your honey is equally lucky!  I suspect very strongly that she knows it too!

- Owl

Artic Wind
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2 posted 2007-12-16 09:48 AM



Very much Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
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3 posted 2007-12-16 10:34 AM


yet no promises of tomorrow;
only the sharing of moments


to be happy, it has to be enough!

Very good!

Love,
Margherita

passing shadows
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4 posted 2007-12-16 11:58 AM


makes me smile

vandana
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5 posted 2007-12-16 12:20 PM


nice
Thalen
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6 posted 2007-12-16 12:30 PM


As a critic and a writer for a school Poetry magazine, I often deal with one of three things.

A. Great Poetry
B. Basic Love poetry
C. Emotionally distraught poetry.

Yours takes on role "A."

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2007-12-16 04:07 PM


Thank you OwlSA, ArticWind, Margherita, passing shadows, vandana and Thalen for the wonderful responses...James
lucky
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8 posted 2007-12-16 07:02 PM


thought I'd harp in and say I like it...

lucky dale

LindsayP
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9 posted 2007-12-16 08:21 PM



Great post James

much enjoyed.

Lindsay

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2007-12-16 08:22 PM


Live in the 'now' and treasure the moment!


Linda

Lincoln
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11 posted 2007-12-16 08:46 PM


James, this was much enjoyed

love it

"When your deepest thoughts are broken, keep on dreaming boy, cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die." -Shannon Hoon

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2007-12-17 04:04 AM


Thank you Lucky, LindsayP, Earth Angel and Lincoln for the wonderful responses...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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13 posted 2007-12-18 05:44 AM


wonderful James!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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14 posted 2007-12-18 02:03 PM


Thank you Roniece for the lovely response...James
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