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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-12-16 05:22 AM

Sharing of Moments

If my honey
is melting
into my arms
what can this
life offer me
that's any sweeter?

She's the only one
I give all of my heart to
with a guarantee for today
yet no promises of tomorrow;
only the sharing of moments,
and in this moment
the sweetness
of her kiss.

JamesLee
15December
2007

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2007-12-16 06:24 AM

You are indeed a lucky man, James. And the most wonderful thing is that you know it! However, your honey is equally lucky! I suspect very strongly that she knows it too!

- Owl

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2007-12-16 09:48 AM

Very much Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2007-12-16 10:34 AM

yet no promises of tomorrow;
only the sharing of moments

to be happy, it has to be enough!

Very good!

Love,
Margherita

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2007-12-16 11:58 AM

makes me smile

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2007-12-16 12:20 PM

nice

Thalen
Junior Member

since 2007-12-15

Posts 35
New Jersey, USA

6 posted 2007-12-16 12:30 PM

As a critic and a writer for a school Poetry magazine, I often deal with one of three things.

A. Great Poetry
B. Basic Love poetry
C. Emotionally distraught poetry.

Yours takes on role "A."

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2007-12-16 04:07 PM

Thank you OwlSA, ArticWind, Margherita, passing shadows, vandana and Thalen for the wonderful responses...James

lucky
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since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

8 posted 2007-12-16 07:02 PM

thought I'd harp in and say I like it...

lucky dale

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

9 posted 2007-12-16 08:21 PM

Great post James

much enjoyed.

Lindsay

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2007-12-16 08:22 PM

Live in the 'now' and treasure the moment!

Linda

Lincoln
Member

since 2007-12-03

Posts 62
Earth

11 posted 2007-12-16 08:46 PM

James, this was much enjoyed

love it

"When your deepest thoughts are broken, keep on dreaming boy, cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die." -Shannon Hoon

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2007-12-17 04:04 AM

Thank you Lucky, LindsayP, Earth Angel and Lincoln for the wonderful responses...James

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

13 posted 2007-12-18 05:44 AM

wonderful James! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2007-12-18 02:03 PM

Thank you Roniece for the lovely response...James

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