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moseytown edges.. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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I sit here on the edges of your moseytown searching for a glimpse of your smile me eyes that could if I let them melt my heart with just a millisecond glance I can see all your rolling hills and highways stretched out forever before my eyes that could if I let them get me lost In a way I might like a little too much I know now your moseytown is filled with beauty and all things that spring from the goodness of your soul that could if I let them fill me up only to find the exit replaced with you are here Not that I would mind... Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... [This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (12-15-2007 05:34 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Not that I would mind." Wonderful writing...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you my sweet James! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a different piece of poetry from you Roniece! I love it! Glad to read you again! It seems you are growing by leaps and bounds! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
that could if I let them melt my heart with just a millisecond glance "if I let them .." do we get the option?? Nooooo, he is too quick! This is brilliant and lovely, dear Roniece! And brings smiles, for which I thank you. Love, Margherita  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dear Dixie... thank you for your comment I appreciate you very much! love RDB Dear Margherita... thank you for your smiles.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Awww, Roniece, I love this. You made me smile and reflect on how much I treasure your friendship. A |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Thank you my sweet friend Ali.. I value your friendship too! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very much enjoyed RDB ARCTIC WIND |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Thank you Arctic for your warm response... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Enjoyed this RDB! "if I let them" - yes, makes me think how much power we have over our lives. To allow or not to allow! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you so much Honeybunch for your comment... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Never loose hope Roniece, keep hoping and I wish you the best of luck. Lindsay |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"only to find the exit replaced with you are here Not that I would mind..."  such a cool write |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Thank you Lindsay... Thank you SEA.. I appreciate both your wonderful comments on my work RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms R & B...mosey town would enjoy your visit I think..come in the summer though when the palms are lazy languid along Rincon...I enjoyed this one ms |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you Mr Daark... I'm a summer gal at heart... I'll keep that in mind! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
A very interesting piece. I liked it very much. Gumpy How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much? |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Thank you Gumpy.. I appreciate your comment.. RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Roniece~ I like it ! I like it !  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh Marge... thank you ! and a very Merry Christmas to you my friend ! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Roniece, this is to be certain, my most favorite piece of your works. I love this style and you write it so well. The ending lines wrapped it up just right, very effective. Well done m'friend...well done, indeed! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I would love for you and DS to collaborate on a poem about Moseytown! Your dreams and his realities!  Enjoyed this very much! Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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