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Open Poetry #41

Mulch Ado... (Haiku)

JLHunter
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0 posted 2007-07-27 01:11 PM

Mulch Ado...

A withered leaf falls,
abandoning the cold perch
that has sapped its strength.

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

TomMark
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1 posted 2007-07-27 01:56 PM

A wonderful Haiku

TomToo

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2 posted 2007-07-27 07:08 PM

I was smiling at the title before I even opened the poem...
and then, of course, the gravity of the poem
lifted me up...

Well done, sir!

gwaihir
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3 posted 2007-07-27 09:23 PM

Fun.

vandana

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4 posted 2007-07-28 11:10 AM

good read

JLHunter
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5 posted 2007-07-30 08:34 AM

Thanks, TomMark.

I do my best...

John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

JLHunter
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6 posted 2007-07-30 08:37 AM

Well, aren't you just a ball of "Sunshine!"

Thanks, Sunshine, you just made my day!

Of course, I'm assuming that you found the puns amusing...?

John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

JLHunter
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7 posted 2007-07-30 08:38 AM

Thanks, gwaihir.

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

JLHunter
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8 posted 2007-07-30 08:39 AM

Thanks to you, too, vandana. And a smiley back at you!

Two, in fact!

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

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