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SouthernJustice
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0 posted 2007-12-15 01:41 AM



Who says men dont cry?

Do you know not John 11:35?

Are you as politically correct as all THAT?

Zacharias saw John The Baptist Begat?

Did THis mountain of a man not cry?

tears stream from his wanton eyes?

Elizabeth we have a son.

John the Baptist our Chosen one.

Who says men dont cry?

Do you know not John 11:35?

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2007-12-15 03:08 AM


short and sweet...

Jesus wept.

Well done piece of work here!

SouthernJustice
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2 posted 2007-12-15 03:30 AM


TY. SJ
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2007-12-15 03:35 AM


much enjoyed your words here.. RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2007-12-15 03:36 AM


oh and welcome to our blue pages... hope to read more of you   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Michael
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5 posted 2007-12-15 05:44 AM


A lot behind your words here -- I much enjoyed this poem.  

welcome to Passions.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2007-12-15 05:45 AM


Nice writing...James
SouthernJustice
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7 posted 2007-12-15 06:01 AM


TY all, SJ
Sunshine
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8 posted 2007-12-17 10:41 AM


Welcome to the blue pages, SJ.
A good, concise poem here.

Please, check your email
for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

SouthernJustice
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9 posted 2007-12-17 03:42 PM


Thank you ONE AND ALL for the lovely comments. AND THANK YOU, Sunshine for the LOVELY Greeting card via my yahoo email. GOD BLESS YOU ALL WITH A MERRY CHRISTMAS. SOuthern Justice
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10 posted 2007-12-17 06:25 PM


A short very much enjoyed poem

ARCTIC WIND

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