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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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Many a phrase has left me I know So many denials and trials of my test All scrolled in a journal which life did supply; My tale of endure and notes of request I scroll but my ink is chameleon bold And blends to the colour on which it is bound Each secret embedded to never be told The scrolling to never be found Beneath all the covers of lifetime retreat My penning as past, in mirror does hide And slowly the ink of each word fades away With all of the heartache inside Each phrase that has left me now hides in the wind To whisper my words on the breeze till the end To give but a thought that a writer might find The mind of a dweller befriend [This message has been edited by Rick (12-13-2007 12:34 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"And slowly the ink of each word fades away With all of the heartache inside" ~ Yes, Rick. Yes, it does... Another fine penning, m'friend! Love to you, Linda |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Linda, lovely to have you visit again my friend, I do appreciate each of your visits and every comment. Thank you, have a wonderful day and take care. Rick |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Rick The breeze blows my way and I feel the poetry that drifts by. Some lingers and stays to be savored many times. Your poetry is that to me - it is wonderful and begs to be savored. Each phrase that has left me now hides in the wind To whisper my words on the breeze till the end Beautiful -- Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beneath all the covers of lifetime retreat My penning as past, in mirror does hide And slowly the ink of each word fades away With all of the heartache inside Everything fades, but the echo remains ... it does! Beautiful write, dear Rick, I enjoyed it. Love, Margherita  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautiful write Rick ARCTIC WIND |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Each phrase that has left me now hides in the wind To whisper my words on the breeze till the end" loved this part soooo much |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Alison, so lovely to see you here my friend, thank you so much for your reply here, it was so much heart felt and appreciatd. Dear Margherita, glad you enjoyed this my friend, lovely to share with people who care, great to see you here visiting. Wind my friend, lovely to have your reply today, thank you for the visit. Dear Sea, good to have you visit my friend, thank you for the time and the reply. To you all my friends, once again thank you to each and every one of you, I appreciate your time and your visits so much, have a wonderful day and really enjoy yourselfs. Loved seeing you all here. Rick |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A very poignant poem Rick, beautifully written in your very special way of writing. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day. Lindsay |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I view beyond the cover and was touched Hope |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Lindsay, thank you for the reply my friend, always good to see you here, hope you are well, take care. Dear Hope, lovely to have you visit my friend, thank you so much for the reply. Rick |
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