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18th and mosey drive
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18th and mosey drive |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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our distance has grown closer together since I put the black stone back and let the water cover it again like it was someone else's heart that needed it's own mountain just to be a free winged bird and my hands still feel the cool of how smooth it should have been even without the wet places just the touching side knowledge of our reading between the lines letting our skins play with skins while our thoughts were never elsewhere ___________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
just the touching side knowledge of our reading between the lines letting our skins play with skins while our thoughts were never elsewhere Mr Daark... I somehow think you are an expert at reading between the lines.. very much enjoyed .. RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms R & B, thank you for reading along and turning pages |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you, D...for the memories and thoughts between the lines~~ You are definitely warmth on a very cold morning ( my gas furnace must have shut down when we lost electricity on Sunday night and I didn't notice until too late to relight the pilot until this morning... not an easy task to do when the system is from the 40's...and I am not almost   M |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is so tenderly soft, what a delight to read. Thanks for the beauty on this cold morning.  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I think D is the one whispering between the lines...so that when we read, we can feel him there....  I certainly do....  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms MMs..so sorry about the cold...but I do imagine you warm the winter with that smile and those thoughts..thanks babe ________________ ms gs, thanks donna for letting me pen something that smiles you _______________ ms suesea, shhhhh does my subtle not show..just a little? thanks hon |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
like it was someone else's heart that needed its own mountain just to be a free winged bird I don't think you expect your readers to cry ... but here is one that is moved to tears ... (don't worry, it must be the "mountain" associated with the "free winged bird" that hit my homesick heart!). So beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks for looking down this avenue |
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