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Margherita
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0 posted 2007-12-09 05:13 AM





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Layers of two woven into one

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Our smiles met and raced down
to tap into each other’s heart
where we used our vivid colors
for the brushing-up of our souls,
blending dark and pale hues
into a never seen combination
of strength and vulnerability
swaying ever so harmoniously.

Every day our painting continues
on a shared canvas of stone,
sometimes you guide my hand
and sometimes I guide yours,
smiles and tears add their brilliance
conjuring up a rainbow dance
upon the layers of you and me
creating a unique serigraphy.

We are each other’s finishing touch
upon our life’s divine work of art.


***


© Copyright 2007 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2007-12-09 05:26 AM


Our smiles met and raced down
to tap into each other’s heart
where we used our vivid colors
for the brushing-up of our souls,

Dear sweet Margherita!  This is divine!! thank you for sharing   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Just another Pete
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2 posted 2007-12-09 08:45 AM


A lovely read; serigraphy had me rushing to my dictionary so thanks for a new word to use

Pete

Artic Wind
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3 posted 2007-12-09 12:12 PM


Another lovely write from a lovely poet

ARCTIC WIND

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4 posted 2007-12-09 12:56 PM


This is lovely. I hope it has a place on the mantle.
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2007-12-09 03:57 PM


So that is what LOVE looks like!!!





Angelo Terrestre

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6 posted 2007-12-09 06:03 PM


Colour, style, imagery this poem has everything, you have done this before i think? LOL..thank you for your words..

Goldenrose.

Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson

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7 posted 2007-12-09 07:48 PM


Yet again a colorfull and joy full peace by you lovely self and yet gain you have filled my head with woundful words

its and honor to comment on your work

iliana
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8 posted 2007-12-09 07:50 PM


  Love this one, Margherita!  Perfection.......*hugs*.....jo
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Deep in the heart
9 posted 2007-12-10 07:25 PM


A silky touch you have here

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Margherita
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10 posted 2007-12-13 12:38 PM


Such loving comments! Thank you from my heart, to each of you dear Poet friends.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2007-12-14 03:27 PM


Yes, silky...James
Bobby Jordan
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12 posted 2007-12-14 03:48 PM


Margherita,

Excellent as ever.  You do it so very well.

Bobby

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13 posted 2007-12-14 05:42 PM


Margherita~
You color words so beautifully~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Margherita
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14 posted 2007-12-18 11:57 AM


Thank you dear Poet friends James, Bobby and Marge! It's so nice to find your loving comments.

Love,
Margherita

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