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TinaTrivett
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since 2006-07-15
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0 posted 2007-12-05 01:26 AM






Waiting, Waiting, Waiting...
for dainty hands
for long eyelashes
for twirls in mirrors
for bows and sashes
for silver rattles
for shiny curls
for slumber parties
for giggling girls

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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2007-12-05 04:58 AM


You made me smile

Don't forget the

skinned knees
dresses caught in branches
hanging upside down
out-racing the boys
secrets
playing in the dishwash water

so wonderful

A

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2007-12-05 08:48 AM


Gotta pass these wonderful words to my daughter whom had a son on the 11/26/2007...maybe your's is a girl, but the words, me thinks, are universally - babies....

Beautiful...

jwesley

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2007-12-05 09:09 AM


"Waiting, Waiting, Waiting..."

~ and boy, oh boy, (girl, oh, girl lol), the waiting was worth every minute! Mind you, I had to  wait 21 days past the due date of my first daughter!

What a precious write.

Love to you,

Linda

TinaTrivett
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since 2006-07-15
Posts 569

4 posted 2007-12-05 09:45 AM


Thanks all. We have 23 days left of waiting until our darling gets here.
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