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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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When, I saw..I couldn't stop, not now, not then nor...I believe...ever. It was more than I imagined, more than I dreamed.... more than my heart would allow to beat at other than a speed beyond the edge of light, beyond the sound barrier...into the cosmos at the breakneck speed of 10,000 riderless, lathered horses...nostrils flaring into the chill of night.. as the Ice Queen rides and a fire's flicker pummels blue eyes.... with a speck, just a speck of black on deep shimmering blue. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Hauntingly beautiful, dear Barry! Wow! Love, Margherita |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a beautiful poem. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Really like this, my friend....but I'm a little dense this day....not sure I know what it said...(which may be a good thing??) LOL jimmy |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very Barry...such amazing imagery inspired by what you saw.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh watcher of the skies... thank you for this! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a gloriously impassioned write! It gave me tingles! ~ the good kind!  It read as though you wrote it straight from your passionate soul ~ and without an edit needing to be made! Ride on, Poet Man! Linda |
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