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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-12-03 06:33 AM

when restless arrows fly
and fill the sky with lines
like wooden hairs falling out
when wind combs the morning

does the lonely of your eyes
find pity sides for this dragon
that has only his hell sounds
and his brimstone for protection

does the lovely of your chains
scourging their dirges on marble
give your soul those gypsy urges
to dance the dawning celebrations

do you miss the leather stitchery
of your jaunty jailer's vest
confined to your panting gasp
in the suffocation of infatuation

and do my arms keep you sleepless

___________

daark

ladylisa
Member

since 2007-04-29

Posts 342
Florida USA

1 posted 2007-12-03 07:31 AM

very nice. enjoyed this piece alot.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2007-12-03 07:43 AM

"and do my arms keep you sleepless"

sigh

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2007-12-03 10:03 AM

"does the lovely of your chains
scourging their dirges on marble
give your soul those gypsy urges
to dance the dawning celebrations"

yes.

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

4 posted 2007-12-03 11:58 AM

I am not awake enough to come up with the words to say how much I love this ... but I do love it.

Alison

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2007-12-03 05:22 PM

ladylisa, thank you ms for the eyes here

________
ms slick, thanks babe for reading this one

____________

ms suesea, I enjoy your eyes on my humble thoughts, thanks much

_____________

ms az, thank you sleepy head for the oatmeal on my pen. And your eyes too...

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2007-12-03 05:34 PM

Another example of poetic mastery, dear D.

One read is never enough, your verses want to be savored slowly and repeatedly.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2007-12-03 05:42 PM

ms mar, you bless me with your reads and comments, thanks lady friend

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2007-12-03 05:56 PM

enjoyed

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2007-12-04 07:21 AM

*smiling* just simply smiling here....

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