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secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-12-02 04:39 PM

    Divergent Paths

Dissolve past and future
in the resplendent ‘now’…
(a moment held in
  ‘deep-Time' suspension)

Let your mind float
as an empty cloud
along the farthest edges
of this sunset Earth.

Wander wintry woods
of fine snow-feather
  dreams
where murmuring mountain
  streams
of radiant purity…
speak softly to the soul
in Nature’s ‘voice,’
that ‘happiness’ lies
within any mind and
heart...freely given
to the spirit of the
  wilderness.

Follow an ‘untraveled’
   poetic path
of cosmic enlightenment,
in awe and simple celebration
of the ever-evolving, wondrously
  diverse complexity
of this boundless Universe!
                    ~

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (12-02-2007 06:17 PM).]

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2007-12-02 05:04 PM

SHDP-

You have a talent in words

ARCTIC WIND

diab soule
New Member

since 2007-12-01

Posts 6
ohio

2 posted 2007-12-02 05:26 PM

Love the message within! Great imagery aswell. Lovely Write Sir.

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

3 posted 2007-12-02 05:31 PM

If I could fold your words into a chair I would just sit on it and enjoy "now".

Fabulous.

Tomtoo

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2007-12-02 09:09 PM

"Follow an ‘untraveled’
poetic path
of cosmic enlightenment"
YES!Now that is the ultimate path!

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

5 posted 2007-12-03 01:46 PM

... two roads diverged ...
those of us who read PIP posts are fortunate that you've chosen the one you have, the artistic path, and traveled it to this website.

This is a fine poem, greatly enjoyed.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

6 posted 2007-12-03 03:01 PM

Description and deep meaning co-mingle to create an almost prayer like reverence in this poem..which i like...but if i may say.. the use of inverted commas could be toned down..but that is just nit picking a great poem..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

7 posted 2007-12-03 07:55 PM

I am in absolute awe of your images.
Patricia

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
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8 posted 2007-12-04 02:25 AM

You see a world that mirror fails to reflect with the far and wide lens of your spirit.

Tomtoo

[This message has been edited by TomMark (12-04-2007 03:05 AM).]

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

9 posted 2007-12-04 05:45 AM

Picture perfect! loved your poem as always,
more than words!

~ARH

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