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It's All in the Beauty of the Names
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It's All in the Beauty of the Names |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I was thinking of passing shadows today and how much I miss her. And then I was thinking of the beauty of so many names here in PiP. When I drive, I often reflect on the wonderful in my life. Many in PiP are now part of the wonderful. I know we periodically play with the names we see here and I was playing, and reflecting on what I find special here. ---- It's All in the Beauty of the Names When the Ides of Marchmadness descend with the Arctic Wind a Dark Stranger makes his Pilgramage among passing shadows. Flying over the SEA, he considers that he is but a soul drifter, (perhaps a Windwalker). nakdthoughts slowly open, unable to conceal A Romantic Heart which yearns to find an Earth Angel dancing amid the Misty Lilacs - one kissed by the Sunshine of the Midnitesun. Smiling, the secondhanddreampoet HopeS to find a Goldenrose – One who will have Gentle Spirit and not see him as an Interloper. Dark floats over the land below, anticipating A Beautiful Disaster, but, instead, spying a Lady in White humming the tune of a Shadow_ Singer. He knows she is his lyricpoet, his lightkeeper, his serenity blaze, a Songbird who beckons him. Thankful that he is not a latearrival, and with the DreamerSpirit of a Ulysses he sails with her to the Moonshadow. Together at long last, MindBodySoul. ---- Alison [This message has been edited by aziza (12-01-2007 11:42 PM).] |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enchanting, Alison. I was thrilled to see "Marchmadness" included in your lovely poem. Thank You. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is very cute, dear Alison! You did a fine job. I miss passing shadows too ... and quite a few others too. Love, Margherita  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY creative and fine!...I almost missed this 'write' completely (glad I didn't!)... some say life is just a 'play on words'... why not names?!... Applause! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
VERY CUTE! This is such a sweet idea! ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Alison, I loved it! ~ and I'm not too proud to admit that I got a kick out of seeing my name included in this delightful ~ and cleverly scribed!!! ~ gift from your pen ~ and heart! ~ and yes, I too miss our Darlin' Dixie. I certainly hope that her 'shadows' are 'passing'.  Linda aka "Earth Angel" lol  |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
I shall have a better pen-name so I could get into your poem too. Tom |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Ida I loved your nic here on PiP since I first saw it - and it fits perfectly in my little story. Thank you for lending it to me. A --- Margherita, You, my friend, deserve a poem all of your own. When I read your comments, I feel the warmth of your smile. Thank you. xoxoxo A --- Bruce, Your name is poetry all of its own. Thank you for the kindness you show me always - you sometimes encourage me in ways you may never know. Thank you. A --- Arctic Wind I had a struggle using your name. You can't seem to decide how you are going to spell "Arctic". I am glad that you enjoyed it and thank you for commenting. You make me smile too. A --- Linda, How could anyone write a poem using the names of PiP and not include our Earth Angel? It would be like seeing flowers and closing our eyes. Or not looking at the beauty of a blue sky. Or not licking choclate off of our fingers. You are all those things to me. xoxoxo A |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Hi Tom, I'll just have to do another. I didn't want to write too much. Thank you for reading. You are in my next one - you and Margherita. A |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Awwww shucks, Alison! That shore was a purdy reply you wrote! ~ Truly, it was!   Linda |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Aziza- Oppsy I messed up when i was signing in, and spelt my name wrong, And i cant change it, But yes its, ARCTIC WIND! LOL  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Great - and I still had time to fix it in the poem. (Yay!) I had it right when I first wrote it, then saw your name here and was like .. whoops. Changed it and now I think we are done with that little issue. Have a good one. A |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
what a wonderful talent you are gorgeous girl!! This was absolutely beautiful - you are so precious to us here... thank you for sharing xxxx RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A, this is so sweet and thank you dear for remembering me and including me. I did one of these some years ago but probably couldn't find it if I tried now. Big hugs to you, you have been on my mind alot lately and I apologize for not replying more often, I just haven't been here near as much as I wish I could be. Hugs and peace, D~  |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
What a nice write, and tribute to the members here. Very well done Aziza. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: Alison, my dear, you are not the first to give a resounding credit to so many wonderful poets in our blue walled home. I thank you for thinking of not only me, but so many of my friends here at Passions. It is one of the most favorite types of poems to read, when we see the names of our friends in poetic tribute. I wonder what you could do with the names of those poets who never even graced the halls of PiP, but left their poetic roots behind in trust?  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
RDB Have I told you that you hold a very special place in my heart? You do. You are so upbeat and encourageing. Thank you for your friendship. xooxxo A ---- Donna, I understand about taking time for ourselves and I think of you lots too. I think I owe you an email and will try to settle down tonight to write to you. I am a fan of your poetry and feel blessed that we are friends too. A --- Tina Thank you, darlin'. A --- Dearest Sunshine, Thank you for stopping in. Yes, I know that poems using names of people here have been written time and again. I think that the names may call us, don't you? I love reading your thoughts and poetry here in PiP. A [This message has been edited by aziza (12-03-2007 01:00 AM).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
This is really cool! I think this sort of thing is rather difficult to write...but you've done a fine job! enjoyed! g "...Never regret anything that made you smile..." |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
A masterpiece! I know this was really a complicated piece of work, but you pulled it off nicely! Hugs~ARH You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wonderful write! I adore your imagination in this one! .....jo |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
A fun read and especially when one spots their own name included. Thank you. "late" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az...very cool stuff...enjoyed and thank you for letting me be part of your name calling |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
This is such a neat poem. I enjoyed it . Gumpy How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much? |
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