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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2007-10-31 10:53 AM


you
are a wonderful person, yet
you
are much more
you
are a part of my heart
you
are the essence of my soul
you
are the very breath of life
to
me


Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2007 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2007-10-31 11:43 AM


this is so beautiful so glad to see you posting again!
Lady In White
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2 posted 2007-10-31 11:48 AM


Yet...

as lovely a word
as

evermore...

Martie
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California
3 posted 2007-10-31 12:40 PM


You
are very romantic!

Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2007-10-31 12:49 PM


you
are the very breath of life


Ah yes, this is LOVE. What more needs to be said? It holds simply everything.

So beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

Honeybunch
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5 posted 2007-10-31 02:19 PM


Yes, must be love!
1slick_lady
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6 posted 2007-10-31 04:21 PM


awwww thanks
i love you tooooooo

smoochessssssss
giggle

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2007-10-31 04:37 PM


Wonderful...James
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
8 posted 2007-10-31 05:09 PM


And I would imagine that YOU are all those thing to her, as well!

Is there a doctor of love in the house? ~ Most assuredly!


Linda

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9 posted 2007-10-31 05:13 PM


Short, simple, effective.
Good job.

rugged_miss
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10 posted 2007-10-31 05:52 PM


Love.. simply but well expressed


Goldenrose
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11 posted 2007-10-31 06:12 PM


You have captured your inner heart and lovescape very well..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson

rosey_red
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12 posted 2007-10-31 06:14 PM


A poem that brings out the inner calm


r&r

MGROVES
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13 posted 2007-10-31 06:44 PM


very sweet~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
14 posted 2007-11-03 04:06 AM


You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

The Lady
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15 posted 2007-11-05 02:47 PM




"you
are the very breath of life"

ah yes
sigh factor at work here...


Earth Angel
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16 posted 2007-11-05 02:49 PM


you
are just plain wonderful

suthern
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17 posted 2007-12-04 10:37 AM


Oh, to be such to someone! *S*

Beautiful write from a beautiful heart! *S*

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